April 2001 Memoirs

The Sorcerer's Kitchen:

The Cupboard:

I love "Ian"!!!! I feel so sorry for him, that picture makes me want

to pick him up and hug the stuffing out of him. "Close the Door" is

creepy but in a GOOD way. "Bedroom Eyes", what's the story behind

that one?

The Pantry:

That picture makes me want to party with them "like it's 1999"!!

The Recipie Book:

I'll have to see more of it before I can really say anything. I love

your drawings. I wish I could draw!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*waaaaaaaaaaaa*

The Oven:

"Sunday Afternoon"- We want more REDEMPTION! We want more

REDEMPTION! What can I say? I love it, but you're right it is a

little redundant now, with all the new stuff that you've written.

Looking forward to seeing the rewrite.

"Looking For Belonging"- This is your Gundam fanfic right? I don't

really know what to say about it other than, it made me feel really

sorry for the main character.

"The Walls"- I get shivers everytime I read it. The only thing I

don't like is this line: (I wish you could too." I answer without

thinking, and there is silence from behind the wall for a long time. I

begin to get scared, what if he left, what if he's gone forever, I

can't handle that, not tonight.). The phrase "behind the wall" just

sounds wrong, it goes against the premise you've set that the voices

are IN the wall.

"The Same But Different"- I would capatilize the "Witch" in the second

paragraph. Why did Kalica say "Oh well, God works in mysterious

ways."? It makes her sound like the christian or is it Maria saying

that. I like how it starts off like a battle of the fundies and then

the relization comes at the end.

"The Discussion"- This is a nice complement to "The Same But

Different". I am so glad that I am not a participant in that

conversation, I think I'd beat my head against a wall. It's like Obi-

Wan Kenobi (older version) vs'Han Solo. :)

"Apathy"- I have now officially lost all faith in democracy. :)

The Cellar:

"The Nonsensical Story"- I have no idea what to say. I like it and it

made me laugh, but I don't understand it. The different papers add a

really neat effect. On a technical note you really should have a next