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by Scott Normandin

Fenton made sure that Lenny could see his hand on his own door handle on the passenger side of the front seat. Lenny reached out for his handle, too. With one final push of his own bravery, Lenny grasped the door handle tightly, his knuckles whitening as he brought his grip tightly to the handle, ready to lift up and open the door on cue.

Fenton nodded once in his direction and began his count, "One."

Lenny's eyes locked on Fenton and the two of them braced themselves as Fenton counted one higher.

"Two."

Lenny closed his eyes and summoned up the last of his tired, aching body's courage. Fenton's voice called out the final cue.

"Three."

Both of them threw their doors open, and Lenny burst out into the desert night air in an exhausted sprint. Fenton had moved to comply with his own intentions of slamming his own door back shut, when one strong arm of the mammoth creature reached down and ripped the door clean off the car by it's hinges. Less than a second later, Fenton witnessed the driver side door meet the same fate. Both doors came crashing to the sand with a loud crash as the beast howled out in expected victory over it's prey.

The monster leapt from the top of the car and spread it's wings in flight as Fenton jumped out of the car, making the attempt to run for his life. The hideous beast descended on Lenny and crushed him with one mighty back leg. Lenny was pinned.

Fenton stared in disbelief at the horrifying thing as it remained standing on it's prey. It gleamed back at Fenton. It's eyes seemed to glow in the dark night. It's lips curled back to reveal long razor sharp teeth, and it's saliva dripped onto it's victim below. It let out a deep slow growl before it lashed out, sinking it's teeth into Lenny.

He stood, frozen, staring at the creature while Lenny screamed in pain. Blood pooled under Lenny and looked like oozing tar against the sand in the darkness. Lenny's screams only proved the beast was interested in inflicting pain. It ate it's victim slowly, taking care to devour Lenny in such away that would not kill him right away.

Feeling a sudden surge of bravery (or stupidity, Fenton could not tell which), he felt the urge to attempt to help. Still standing just a couple of feet from the car, he dashed to retrieve the only weapon he knew existed, the pipe. He clenched it tightly in his fist, pausing just a moment to ask himself, "What am I doing? I must be out of my mind."

 


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