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by Scott Normandin

Alex left with a very full stomach. The food was slightly greasy, but other than that he gave the place a rave review. His friends would truly love this place. It would be tough to find a place better, he thought. Of course, he could always find places with better ritzy atmosphere or more sophicated clientele, but never could be find a place with a more robust and exotic menu.

Alex left the restaurant fully satisfied. Even though his stomach was full, he walked with a spring in his step and a glide to his slight prance. He was appeased ini so many ways.

The restaurant was a bit off the main road, so he had to walk a bit to get to his car. The pavement just damp from a recent light rain gave a hearty smell to the warm night summer air. He didn't mind the walk at all, he was even humming a bit.

Suddenly he stopped walking. Something wasn't right. His stomach was churning as if something inside of him wouldn't digest ans was fighting to get back out. His hand made its way over his stomach as he started limping forward again. He was getting sick.

He knew he was not going to make it to the car without vomiting and he was not going to allow his "jag" to be the recipient of his illness, so he looked for a space in between buildings to duck into. He lurched forward as his vision started to blur. He used his spare hand to brace himself up against the cold brickwork adorning the facades of the storefronts. The paint peeling from the bricks gave his hand extra purchase as his other hand continually held its place at Alex's stomach, and he was beginning to feel dizzy.

He forced a slight smile, "Damn, figures I would get food poisoning from a hole like that." His attempt to humor himself did not ease the feeling in his stomach that began to push at him from the inside.

Alex found a break between buildings that he could sneak into. There was barely three feet of room for the stores' rubbish containers and old discards from people that had no idea where to place their unwanted items. Such a place was a breeding ground for rats and transients, and served as a perch for lowlife rapists and muggers, but Alex didn't care. He was very ill.

He rounded the corner and dropped down between two garbage cans and allowed himself to be sick. As each time he heaved, it became more and more violent. He was not going to be able to take it much more. He forced himself to expel as much as he could. He did not want anything left in his system. He was beginning to feel drained and was loosing his balance. He dropped down to his hands and knees as he felt himself sway, feeling darkness close in around the corners of his eyes. A kind of blackness he did not want. Who knows who would come across him in such an unscrupulous place? Who knows who would rob him or kill him?

He fell down sideways onto the ground as the darkness closed in. There was nothing he could do to stop it. He felt himself drifting away into nothingness that made him ore afraid of the unknown than he had ever been. He had heard stories of people that had become victims in these dark alleyways, and he was terrified. He stared out into the darkness as he felt his consciouness slip away.

 

 


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