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Character
Inventing Fictional People

Characters are central to fiction. Primary. A character come to life will be complex and forced into conflicts, the essence of the story. They are born of one's own life, the lives of others, the traits of many people - they become living people who wear the masks of drama. There are techniques in portraying a character, but a good writer must become adept in using all of these techniques in an effortless way in order to create memorable fictional people.

    "...be genuinely curious about the people populating your fiction."  - Josip Novakovich




Exercise #3: Describe someone's character by body language only, avoiding the head or face. (1 page)

   
 
   The chipset which had consumed me for the past year was killer, and I wasn't about to play by the rules of the net on this one. Like millions of other kids, I'd posted and downloaded my share of schematics. But this wasn't just another tweaked game controller. I'll be rich and famous, or so I thought.
   My first harsh lesson came from the mind-numbing eight hour bus ride to Dallas, and the interminable two hours on the Metro. I felt like I had aged ten years, at least.
   A groan of disappointment at the modest minimall storefront of PASOCON.net sapped another ten years out of me. But PASOCON was major alt, and my certainty that it was the only site capable of doing my chip designs (codenamed "Godzilla") justice had compelled my determined journey. And so I crossed the intersection to slowly approach the corner store, my backpack slung over a shoulder.
   From across the parking lot I could hear the angry argument. Two people stood in front of a table set up outside next to the entrance of the store. It was definitely a one-way discussion. A tall well groomed young guy stood straight with his head bent way way down, like he was praying or concentrating real hard, while an old man was right in his face in spastic fury. The man was short, no taller than me, but fat. In tight blue jeans, his skinny legs were widely spaced and firmly planted to the asphalt by a pair of white cowboy boots. His puntuated yelling was matched by wild, jerky motions of his upper torso, frequently lunging forward at the unfortunate young man as if to savagely bite his head. With his stiffened arms extended out like in a muscle man pose, I was certain that the old man would throw a punch. With a bellowing breathless stream of obscenities, he quickly turned his back, swept back his wet dirty blond hair, and headed back into the store. The kid was a frozen statue.
   I let out my breath, undecided between a "wow" or "whoa" at the scene I just saw. Or perhaps the exhalation was preparation for the possibility that this angry old man was the owner of PASOCON. Things may not work out the way I practised for the past ten hours. That's another lesson I learned.(JH, 10/14/99)
 
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Self Critique: Boy, that was ugly to write. I hope nobody ever has to experience a boss like that. I think I did okay as far as the exercise goes, but it will take greater skill and more practice to apply this technique to subtle and complex characters.
   
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